It is well structured, but you need to do the following to redraft and improve it: - Use the brief to go through and highlight each of the terminology that it wants you to cover. This will let you easily see what you are missing and what you need to add in - It should be illustrated, so add images from your examples! - You need to reference other sources too, such as online academic articles that discuss the 180 rule or crosscutting, etc
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ReplyDeleteIt is well structured, but you need to do the following to redraft and improve it:
- Use the brief to go through and highlight each of the terminology that it wants you to cover. This will let you easily see what you are missing and what you need to add in
- It should be illustrated, so add images from your examples!
- You need to reference other sources too, such as online academic articles that discuss the 180 rule or crosscutting, etc
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